申请出国留学，前期的申请工作中，需要准备充足的申请材料，其中动机信是申请的关键材料，出国留学网为大家分享了留学动机信的英文模板，大家可以参考一下。

　　一、留学动机信范文

　　I am a junior student coming from Arts & Metiers ParisTech in France which is a mechanical engineering school and whose main task is cultivating general engineer. I have a good command of professional knowledge， and I am also capable in practice through study and experiment. However， I still long for a further study and improving professional skills， so I look forward to majoring in design of rotating machine at cranfield university in UK.

　　There are four reasons why I long for an further study in cranfield university. Firstly， I ache with desire to experience and have education of a comprehensive university which has professional studies in different majors rather than a general engineering school. Secondly， I need to improve my English urgently. It is of great help in job hunting mastering English， French and my mother tongue Chinese. Lastly， I realize that I have great interest in machinery， and generally speaking I have a good report at some courses in my first school year， such as stress analysis， bearing design and gear design， so the knowledge I have mastered laies a solid foundation for me to further study design of rotating machine.

　　I am confident I will have a good performance if your esteemed school would like to give me the entrance chance. On the one hand， my social experiences help me a lot. I have a good adaptive ability and I can merge into new environment quickly.

　　For example， I had no idea about French as a foreigner at the very beginning， and I had never been in touch with French when I graduated from senior high school. After that I started to study french， and I entered Arts & Metiers ParisTech after three years of study. My work experiences make me deal with interpersonal relationship very well. I worked in a Chinese restaurant in the past， and I alsoworked as a trainee at Photonics Bretagne.

　　On the other hand， I perform well at school. I have a good understanding in theory and I can understand the formula analysis thoroughly， moreover I like to share my opinions with members in group work， so I am competent for group work with students coming from different countries at Cranfield University. And I want to be a mechanical design engineer in motor corporation in the future， and majoring in design of rotating machine at cranfield university is of great help for the position.

　　In conclusion， I have strong desire to further study at your esteemed univeristy. I really hope I will have the opportunity to improve my professional skills as well as overall quality， and it is a great honour for me to study and practice at the honorable school.

　　二、留学动机信写作内容

　　1、简介：介绍自己的学术情况，本科专业背景及成果，如果工作了要写清工作情况，选择学校和专业的原因。

　　开头应该以Estimado seor / seora 开头，对录取官做基本问候。同时开展自我背景介绍。

　　2、选择该专业的原因：为什么会选择该校该专业，这是比较重要的一部分。如果你的动机信写的都不能打动自己，还怎么奢望打动录取官？

　　另外，写写在专业研究上有什么发现和成果；如果是跨专业申请，可以写对所跨专业感兴趣的原因，并表示自己已经在学习和收集相关领域的知识，表明自己有足够的学术能力来独立完成研究。

　　3、语言水平及工作经验：现在在西班牙读硕士，语言等级要求相对较高。如果同学已经拥有DELE等级证书或SIELE考试成绩，需要在动机信里向录取官呈现出来，这样能够保证录取官对你语言水平的认可程度。在西班牙留学，良好的西语水平是非常重要的！切记！

　　如果是已经工作的同学，可以着重写工作内容、经历等，表现优秀的话，会很加分。

　　4、未来发展：在西班牙读研能够为自己带来什么？这些也需要在动机信里展露出来，对未来的期许和毕业后的发展方向，让录取官知道你对自己有一个详细的规划，是认真对待来西班牙读研这件事的。

　　说了这么多，总的来说，动机信就是一封纸上的推荐自己、展示自己的渠道。

　　最后，要向录取官表示谢意，感谢他阅读你的动机信，并表示自己非常期待得到他的回复。

　　三、留学动机信写作误区

　　文体冗赘

　　由于留学动机信的篇幅本身就不是很大，通常为一到两页，因此我们需要重视自己写作和表达方式的简洁性，不让动机信过分烦琐与冗赘。

　　内容空洞

　　有一些申请者在motivation letter中描写自己的成就或能力的时候，仅使用空洞的词语，而没有提出任何实际例子。所以提供事实来支持自己的观点是第一要务，可是值得一提的是，并非只正式的研究活动或比赛才被认为项目， 课程上的比较大作业也可以作为研究项目，也可以在动机信上装点门面。

　　OTIVATION LETTER格式及语法问题

　　语法问题是一个我们常常提到的话题，而且这是国外学校的老师特别讲究的一点。在写作申请学校动机信时，学生一定要关注语法方面。进行认真的写作后，自己再审校几遍，如果觉得没必要，那也可以请你的同学或朋友帮你一个忙， 改正文书的语法错误。此外， motivation letter格式也是大家经常忽略的一个问题。即便学校没有对动机信格式的具体要求， 你也要遵循基本写作原则。