去瑞士留学的话,动机信的书写很重要,那么瑞士留学动机信怎么写呢?下面是一篇动机信范文。跟着出国留学网来看看瑞士留学动机信范文一封,欢迎阅读。
Dear Mr. /Mrs. :
I appreciate that you can take time off your busy schedule to read my letter. This is a letter of my motivation to apply for the Master degree of Precision Manufacturing(MPM) of University of Applied Sciences of Southern Switzer- land (SUPSI).
First, allow me to introduce myself. My name is XX. I’m a first grade postgraduate of Guangdong University of Technology(GDUT). My major is Mechanical Engineering and Automation. I get my bachelor's degree in Mechanical Engineering and Automation at Wuhan University of Technology in 7th July, 2007. After I graduated from my university, I worked in Jiangling automobile joint-stock company for about 1year. Then I took the Postgraduate entrance examination and was enrolled in GDUT at last.
There are some hearty reasons why I like SUPSI and the major of MPM:
First,I am interested in MPM, for I have been studying in Mechanical Engineer- ing and Automation since I started my university life. It’s well known that this major plays a foundational role of the developing of industry and it is easy for us to find a , in my opinion,is a similar major with Mechanical Engine- ering and tly speaking, it’s the specialization and concretion of Mechanical Engineering and Automation. MPM in SUPSI based on a set of prominent and well balanced lectures that not only promote individual profess- nal skills and cultivate their ability but also their creativity, management level and shape attitude. I think I can get more professional knowledges than I can get inland and extend my knowledge fields to enhance my competitive strength.
Second, SUPSI can offer me good teaching quality. SUPSI is one of the eight Universities of Applied Sciences in institution focuses on education based on professional need and on applied research, and , at the same time, it provides a practice-oriented education and offer a wide range of master’s programs. The educational goal of MPM in SUPSI is to shape new professsional figures characterized by reseach and operate skills through an effective training path constantly merging reseach and education. For my part,I prefer practice-oriented educcation to pure reseach-oriented.
Thirdly, SUPSI can affords me a good environment to study. According to Global Competitiveness Report 2009-2010, Switzerland ranked number one among a total of 131 surveyed ’s a reflection of a world-class capacity for innovation, combined with a highly sophisticated business culture. The country has a well-developed infrastructure for scientific reseach,with close collaboration between the leading research centersand industry. What’s more, the top-notch infrastructure, well-built education and health care systems as well as clean and beautiful environment all provides a safe,conve- nient, comfortable and healthy living environment for me to live and study.
Additional, SUPSI gives a preferential tuition fee. The institution cooperates with our to the cooperation between the Chinese and Swiss governments on this project,the fees are low.I think choosing to study in SUPSI can lower the financial pressure to my family. Furthermore, after graduating from SUPSI, I will become more competitive and enjoy a more positive prosp- ect in future job market.
Finally, thank you for your reading again. I am seriously interested in studying at your university. What I care most is, whether I can be accepted by you, I wis- h!
Looking forward to hearing from you and with best regards to you!
Yours sincerely,
xx
用户评论
哇,这简直是万能模板啊!我要申请同一个专业,这篇开头简直太完美了!能让我快速入门,省时间想想自己想表达什么。
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我的英语不太好,能不能提供一些英文模板参考?或者讲一下这份中文模板如何翻译成英文,这样更方便我使用。
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感觉这个动机信模板比较通俗易懂,适用于各个学校和专业的申请吧?可以简单修改下自己情况,就能写出来了!
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虽然这个模板很有参考价值,但我还是觉得每份申请都需要独特的个性化表达。光靠模板不一定能体现自己的真诚与热情。
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我刚开始准备申请材料,这篇动机信中文范文非常 helpful!帮我理清了思路,以后再用的时候可以先根据这个框架来写。
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我觉得这个模板里“未来展望”部分有点过于理想化,应该结合实际情况,展现出更清晰具体的な目标和计划。
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我看了很多动机信范文,感觉这个模板写的比较通俗易懂,不像有些范文显得过于书面化,更符合我的表达方式。
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之前一直以为写动机信很复杂,看完这篇文章才知道原来是有这么多个框架可以参考的!这个模板给了我很多灵感。
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我觉得这个模板最大的问题在于“个人情况”部分不够具体,应该写得更生动一些,才能让评审真正感受到你的故事和决心。
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这篇文章真的很有用!帮我解决了很多困扰,现在我更有信心去写一篇优秀的动机信。感谢作者分享!
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我感觉这个模板有些鸡汤文的感觉,更应该注重客观叙述自己的能力和优势,而不是空泛地表达一些理想信念。
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这段关于学习目标的描述,我觉得太笼统了,应该更加明确自己在哪个方面想发光发热,这样才能更有说服力。
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这个模板很棒!帮我找到了方向,也能让我更快写出动机信内容。以后申请过程中会再参考他!
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感觉这个模板还是需要自己结合实际情况进行修改和完善,不能完全照搬,要体现自己的个性和思考。
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这个模板虽然不错,但我更建议大家多阅读一些优秀的动机信范文,从中汲取灵感和技巧,才能写出一篇更加有深度、更有说服力的文章。
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