不管学生们要去哪个国家留学，个人陈述都是学生们必须准备的。但有的学生不知道个人陈述要怎么写，所以出国留学网小编这就给大家带来留学的个人陈述英文范文，来看看这些范文吧。

　　一、个人陈述范文

　　Women aren’t suited for such hard subjects， my friend Seung-woo told me with a smug smile. Seung-woo didn’t think that mathematics was a field for women. Although he was my age and wasn’t tied down by most traditional beliefs， he believed that only men could be true mathematicians. The majority of people in my country， South Korea， believe the gender stereotype that women are inherently inferior to men in mathematics. I strongly disagree with this outdated notion. Women are just as capable of outstanding mathematical achievement as men， and I am determined to help disprove gender stereotypes through my example.

　　Mathematics has always given me a deep sense of satisfaction. Even in elementary school， I was attracted to the precision and logic inherent in mathematical formulas. I devoured as much mathematical information as I could， collecting theorems of mathematicians such as Gauss and Euclid like other students collected stamps. I had the opportunity to test my skills and knowledge in high school， when I competed in several national math competitions， including the Korea Mathematical Olympiad. My strong showing in these venues， along with my top math grades and perfect math score on the Korean SAT， bolstered my confidence in my abilities. I was proud to prove to others that I was capable of performing at the highest levels.   Despite my strong interest and achievement in mathematics， it has been difficult for me to realize my potential due to the Korean educational system， which emphasizes cramming for tests instead of critical understanding. More significantly， Korean social biases against women in the fields of math and science have discouraged me from pursuing my love of mathematics. Thus， I want to study in the United States， where I will be able follow my dream without these constraints. For about a year， I have taken English language courses at a university in Washington， D.C.， where I have gained a glimpse of American academic life from the inside. I am very impressed by American students devotion to their studies and the systems ability to support each students goals. I am therefore especially interested in attending Boston College， which， in addition to offering outstanding math and science courses， is renowned for its emphasis on cultivating students full development， or curapersonalis. At Boston College， I will be able to focus on my goal of becoming an excellent mathematician.

　　I am determined to succeed， but I know that I must overcome many challenges. Sometimes， when I feel discouraged by the obstacles I face as a Korean woman in mathematics， I imagine what my life will be like ten years from now. Armed with a Boston College degree， I will visit my old friend Seung-woo. We will have corresponded over the years， so hell already know about the many mathematics articles published in my name， and he will be well aware of the international acclaim they received. I will savor the day when Seung-woo admits that I was correct in believing that I could succeed as a mathematician. I will be proud to know that partly due to my achievements， the door to increased opportunities for women in math and science has swung open a little bit wider.

　　二、留学陈述写作要点

　　1、要诚实地写作。如果你发现你的读者能够从别人那里读到和你的文章类似的内容，那请你回到草稿本从头再来。

　　2、要在整体上传达积极的信息。批判主义不会获得招生委员会的好感。

　　3、要注重文章的深度，而不是广度。着重一个事件或想法，而不是对全部的事情泛泛而谈。要进行个性化和故事性的思考。

　　4、要抛弃你的第一个想法或视角。因为那一个往往被太多人想到和使用过。

　　5、要写得有趣但更要写出自己。传达你真实的想法和感受。别企图给自己加上你并不具有的情趣、价值和观念。

　　6、要写那些你亲眼看到、亲身经历的事情，而不要写超越你作为一个年轻人所能经历的事情。书本上的东西和其它的二手经验无法告诉你的读者你是怎样的人。

　　7、要写那些你感受强烈的事情。如果你写自己不感兴趣的题目，那么你就会显得不真诚或缺乏激情。

　　8、要写你自己，同时也要写别人。很大程度上我们的个体是在和别人的交往过程中被定义的。在你的文章中体现这一点可以使你显得不那么以自我为中心。

　　9、要写出你的丰富经历，但是要避免过多的想象。可以从景象、声音甚至气味等各种角度全方位地将你和你的读者联系起来。但要当心别过分使用你的想象力。否则结果就是显现一种刻意的、不自然的风格，让你的读者觉得你是在故作有创意。