去加拿大读书的学生,需要认真的准备好自己的个人陈述,这是个人优势展示的辅助材料。跟着出国留学网了解一下加拿大留学申请需不需要准备个人陈述?
书写技巧
开始要趁早
一般要给自己4-6周的时间来写这个人陈述。不是因为你在两天之内写不完,而是为了避免时间太短促,个人压力很大,因而影响发挥,而且我们需要时间得到反馈。如果你是一个拖延症患者,给自己的写作设置一个期限,基本上就一周左右吧(这样距离申请还有三周的时间),必要的时候才能有时间检查和修改。
留意你的字数,可以帮助你更好的突出自己的优点
有不少同学,洋洋洒洒的写了好几千字,事实上,没有老师愿意阅读这么多字的。当你留意你的字数统计列表时,你会有意识的将一些不重要的内容删除掉,留下更重要的内容,帮助你突出自己的优点。
充足的时间,才能写好PS
如果你下周就是截止期了,那么你要准备邮寄雅思托福成绩单,从教务处开本科成绩单,从学院里开出各类证明材料,你很可能没法专心写作的。
因此,至少准备几个星期,来慢慢写作你的个人陈述。由于你是初次写作,会走很多弯路,浪费掉一些时间,所以早点动手,是个不错的选择。
注意使用一些高级词汇,但是别走太远了
比如,用accomplish代替do, 这样会显得你的语言水平更高一些。但是,不要使用GRE的长难句来写作。
不要请母语为英语的人写作
PS是需要你个人提交的材料。而你作为一个,英语非母语的人,写的东西有瑕疵是非常正常的。找母语人士写,小心过犹不及了。
自我反思时间
简单写一写为什么是你的理由:你有一些什么样能拿得上台面的个人兴趣、天赋和能力,让你在众多申请者中脱颖而出。
了解学校
找出你申请的学校什么方面最有名,最骄傲的部分是什么,证明为什么这个学校适合你与你的兴趣发展。运用这些知识储备向招生负责人展示你有多了解学校,这些成绩对你而言究竟代表了什么意义。举个例子,你感兴趣的学校刚好有一个很大型的本科研究项目,告诉他们你很愿意成为那个项目的一份子(前提是那个项目对你的专业学习有帮助)。如果学校里有一位你特别喜欢的老师,你想要跟他/她一起学习,一起合作,那么就在你的陈述中写出来。
英语范文
It is my conviction that the meaning of life does not dwell in the length of time that one can live or the material abundance that one can acquire, but in the richness and the wonderfulness of life itself. With the increase of my age, many things in my life have changed. But one thing remains constant, that is, I will consistently insist on doing what I like to do and hope that my endeavors can be valuable to the life of others. I see this as the only way whereby I can realize the value of my life.
My undergraduate study focused on economics and I achieved remarkable scholastic performance in this field. My GPA is 3.44 (my GRE score is 2020 and TOEFL---- ). For four consecutive years of my undergraduate study, I received scholarships for my distinguished academic performance. Due to my equally prominent performance in extracurricular activities I was conferred on the Outstanding Student in Campus Activities. However, honestly speaking, my real interest lies not in economics, but in education. Ever since I was a primary school student, I had cherished a strong desire for a teaching career exemplified by my teachers. In the actual teaching career that I embarked on upon my graduating from university, I have become increasingly aware that the existing educational conditions in China are far from satisfactory. The backward teaching methodology and the prevailing pedagogical ideology have rendered Chinese education out of place with the modern international development in education. On the macro level, the current education theory and practice in China lag significantly behind advanced countries in the West. For instance, though education via the internet has achieved considerable development in past two years, in practical operation such education has more often than not deteriorated into an extended form of the conventional examination-oriented education instead of a really interactive process. In my personal experience, despite the fact that some of the problems that I have encountered in my teaching career can be solved by consulting relevant technical literature, I have found that the more serious flaws inherent in China's current educational system cannot be worked out easily. Under such circumstances, an advanced program in education becomes necessary.
In this age of information, traditional education, both in its ideology and methodology, has met unprecedented challenge like many other aspects of human existence. Meanwhile, the pursuit for higher levels of educational development and of the quality of life has largely transformed the educational value orientation of the general public. The educational model that is centered around the cognitive and intellectual instruction has been seriously questioned. Greater attention has been devoted to the cultivation of well-developed personality and to the ontological status of the individual in education. Such issues as the internal studies of education science, scientific decision-making in education, and meta-education have also been increasingly emphasized upon. There have also been innovations in educational research methodology. The tendency has been to combine modern technology with humanistic research categories and with naturalistic research categories, and to organically integrate qualitative descriptions with quantitative descriptions. It is also important to carry out educational experimentations in which educational predictions are complemented by educational feedbacks. Both the complexity of education and the complexity of human individuals have made the comprehensive application of diverse educational approaches necessary. Those new horizons are what fascinate me.
用户评论
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加拿大留学的确是很多人的梦想,但申请材料准备的确挺复杂的,尤其是一些文书类的撰写需要花时间去琢磨。幸好有这篇博客详细讲解了每个步骤,让我能更有条理地开始准备了!
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我打算明年申请加拿大的教育学硕士项目,正在苦恼着如何整理材料,特别是自我陈述的写作。感谢博主分享这些宝贵的经验,希望能顺利帮助我完成材料的准备工作!
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加拿大留学的好处确实有很多,但申请过程也充满挑战。这篇博客虽然针对的是教育学硕士申请,但对于其他专业申请者来说,还是有一些借鉴意义的。学习方法、做好规划,这都是非常重要的!
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我想去加拿大读研,准备申请教育学方面的专业。看了这篇博文后感觉自己距离留学目标又近了一步!希望以后能跟更多跟我有相同梦想的朋友交流经验,一起加油冲刺梦寐以求的北美校园!
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自我陈述写起来真是太难了!不知道该写些什么内容才能让招生老师眼前一亮。这篇博客说了一些很棒的想法和技巧,我会好好学习一下,希望能写出让人满意的文书。
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申请材料准备确实是件大事,感觉加拿大留学要求很高。但只要认真对待每一步骤,相信我就能克服这些困难。感谢博主分享的实用经验!
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加拿大留学确实很热门,竞争也非常激烈啊,所以材料都要做到极致才行!这篇博客提醒了我很多关键点,我要好好加把劲准备申请材料了!
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自我陈述需要展现个人的特点和优势,这篇文章分析的真好!我现在开始思考如何突出我的个人经历和对教育学的热情。
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加拿大教育学硕士项目竞争很激烈,所以每个申请者的材料都非常重要,特别是自我陈述这个最重要的部分。我会像博主说的那样认真撰写,展现我独特的价值。
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这篇博客写的太详细了!感觉自己马上就能踏上加拿大留学之旅似的,真是对需要准备留学资料的同学来说是一本宝典!
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加拿大留学确实很优秀,但申请过程中也会有些困惑。看了这篇博文后,我才明白怎样才能更好地准备材料,感谢分享这些实用的经验!
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虽然这篇文章主要讲カナダ教育学硕士的申请,但我发现了很多关于留学申请的普遍技巧,对于我来说也很有用!希望我可以顺利完成申请程序,圆梦加拿大留学!
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自我陈述的确是一个难题。这篇博客提供了一些很好的写法建议,让我感觉更有信心了!我会参考这些方法,努力写出一份能打动招生老师的文书。
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觉得自我陈述更像是一场“卖自己”的演出,需要精心准备和展示才能吸引观众(招生老师)。这篇博客帮了我很多!我明白了应该怎样突出我的优势和潜力。
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加拿大教育学硕士申请确实很严格,希望我能顺利通过审核。感谢博主分享这些宝贵经验,我会认真做好材料准备工作!
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看了这篇文章后,我发现很多人都认为自我陈述是最难写的部分,私も同意这个观点!但博客里提到的技巧很有帮助,我会认真学习一下并运用到我的申请中。
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加拿大虽然很发达,但申请材料准备也挺费劲的。这篇博文帮了我不少忙,让我至少知道应该从哪些方面入手开始准备了。感谢作者分享!
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