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(1) 抛弃冗长模板
"使用模板,一律四分"的说法或许有些夸张,但也在一定程度上反映了考官对于模板的深恶痛绝。其实模板套句并不是不能用,而是要运用灵活,不留痕迹。在很多文章中,开头结尾的两个复杂到爆炸的长句在通篇简单句和基础语法错误的映衬下格外醒目,这种稍微有些英语知识的人都会识破的小聪明,更不可能逃过考官的眼睛。
建议学生们积累一些简单实用的基本套句,如:
我们的生活已离不开…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我们随处都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已经不再罕见
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人们开始意识到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在几十年前,…很少有人会想象到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly due to the use of Internet)。
(2) 开头具体化
具体化的开头是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特点,即 "要让考官觉得你这个开头是完全针对题目写出来的",要做到这一点,就必须紧紧围绕话题展开。比如下面这道题目:
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(开头段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different individuals can hold various opinions due to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(开头段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(开头段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
开头段一为典型的模板式开头,废话多,与话题关系小,毫无疑问会引起考官的反感。开头段二虽然也使用了模板句, 但运用较灵活,不足之处是背景句没有紧扣话题,虽然谈到科技影响生活但没有具体到'relationship'。开头段三语言虽简单但紧紧围绕话题'relationships'展开,灵活的使用了一些简短的小套句,而这样具体化的开头最受考官青睐。
(3) 简单即是美
雅思作文考的不是文学修养而是学术写作能力,即如何运用语言有效的表达观点证明观点,因此,简单明了的开头会给考官留下效率高的好印象,而且简单的开头段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也节省了时间。
例:
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
用户评论
终于等到这个文章了!一直都在寻找好的雅思考试作文开头的素材,这个“万能句子”真得很管用啊! 赶紧收藏去试试看效果~
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这篇文章写的太好了,把开头段的写作要领都总结得很清晰。之前我的开头总是空泛乏味,看来得好好学习一下这些“万能句子”,让我的雅思作文更有说服力了!
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其实我觉得开头段不一定要那么生硬地用 “万能句子”啊,可以根据具体的主题自由发挥,写一些更具有个人色彩的引子,那样才显得更加自然和引人入胜。
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我一直觉得雅思作文最重要的不是开头的“万能句子”,而是要紧跟题目要求,逻辑清晰地表达自己的观点。好的开头应该为整个文章内容服务的!
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看了很多类似的文章,这个博客的内容还是比较独特的,特别是在分析各种“万能句子”的适用场景方面做得很好,对我要准备雅思考试的学生来说很有帮助!
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我以前在作文中喜欢使用一些热门的 “万能句子”,后来发现这样很容易写不出自己的想法,反而显得缺乏深度和个性。真应该早点看到这篇博文!
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这种套路式的“万能句子”确实能凑合用,但要是想拿到高分,还是得把文章结构、论述逻辑和语言表达都提升上去!
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我觉得选择适合的“万能句子”,还要考虑自己的写作风格和目标分数。如果只是为了凑词数的话,效果肯定不如真正能引出文章主题的开头。
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对雅思作文开头的理解真是要不断地精进,这篇文章给了我很好的启发!以后我会多留意一些不同的“万能句”用法,尝试用更灵活的方式来组织开头段落。
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学习了这些“万能句子”之后,我感觉自己的雅思写作信心增加了,特别是对于那些容易卡壳的题目,有了些许破题思路!
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这篇文章让我对雅思作文开篇的写作技巧有了更清晰的认识, “万能句子” 其实是一种工具,要用好它需要结合文章主题和个人风格进行运用。
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之前写完开头就不知道往后怎么接了,看来学习一下“万能句子”,能让我的文章更有规划。希望这篇博文能帮助更多人提高雅思写作水平!
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我有一个疑问: “万能句子” 真的会适用于所有topic吗? 还是说应该根据不同的主题选择合适的开段方式呢?
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这篇文章让我意识到,优秀的雅思考试作文不仅仅要注重开头,“万能句子”只是辅助工具,更重要的是需要清晰的思路、合理的论证和流畅的表达!
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看了这篇博文之后,我突然觉得自己的雅思写作水平还有很大提升的空间呀! “万能句子”是敲门砖,但要真正写出高分作文还需多加练习!
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建议作者可以加入一些具体的例句和素材,让“万能句子”的使用更加直观易懂。这样更能帮助读者更好地掌握写作技巧!
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虽然 “万能句子” 很实用,但我觉得每个同学的写作风格都不一样,也不能完全依靠它们来套用,还是要结合自己的想法灵活运用。
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